Warrior Princess

Dang. I hate it when I pour my heart and soul into a poem and then it only gets one review. lol XP

I love the sea all the time too. :) It just has a certain higher fascination for me at the times mentioned in this poem.

Um....that was brilliant. XP Darn you.

Thank you! :) Now to answer questions. (1) Why a dragon? No particular reason. Just a stereotypical fairy-tale danger. (2) Haha. I don't know; I never really considered whether Adrian ...

This is just awesome. Call me a geek, but I couldn't help thinking of "Supernatural." (Which is a good thing, by the way!) I like how it was gritty yet ...

Oh, I will. Just wait and see. ;)

I'm glad you liked it! Now, to answer your questions. (1) The tone of the story is intended to be slightly tongue-in-cheek, so I allowed myself a real-world reference for ...

This is very nice! My favorite lines are probably "The glittering jewels on the branches Remind me of when we last kissed You clinging to me Like the rain clings ...

Thanks! I was like half asleep while writing this lol. Does it show? O_O

Wow, this was beautiful and emotionally honest. It was almost painful to read, but in a good way. Great job!

I liked this. All I would say is, get rid of the exclamation points. They look kind of cheesy. But yeah, very good overall. :)

Thank you, Jane! :) And I know exactly what you mean, when you write something that feels like pure genius but is somehow overlooked by everyone! Grrrrrrrr.

Thanks Blue! Man, it's sad when one puts so much effort into a poem and then it gets only one review..... :'(

I loved this! Well that's pretty much all I can say.

Thanks you everybody! :) Actually, though I named this poem "Peter Pan" it's really only about that particular story in a metaphorical sense. It's really about my brief romance with ...